Jaman, your
blog is on track.
So far:
WWW: Your
ideas are usually thoughtful and detailed. You understand the conventions of a
magazine and I can see that you have used them in the preliminary task.
EBI: Some
of your posts, particularly recent research, need more detail added. Your images of your target audience are actually images of pop stars - your target audience can't be Michael Jackson - he's dead! Put images of real people in your real target audience bracket.
